Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Feedback Narendra

Narendra had seen the outlines of first two spreads.


- Visuals are working, will need detailing while rendering as they are rather large in size.


- Hand written font looks too constructed, needs to be more organic. ( i think that since there is construction in the book, i could use the type to play with in that context)


- soft pastels


-texture of bird and lapwing is working in charcoal

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